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I wonder what you dream about,
As your lying alone in bed.
Laying in the gentle darkness,
What thoughts run through your head?

I wonder what you think about,
As you pick up your head and sigh, I wonder what you dream about,
As your lying alone in bed.
Laying in the gentle darkness,
What thoughts run through your head?

I wonder what you think about,
As you pick up your head and sigh,
And make a wish upon a star,
Beneath the twilight sky.

I wonder what you write about,
As you compose in your diary,
Writing words of love,
That become so fiery.

I wonder what you sing about,
As you sweetly cast you voice,
So mellifluous,
That even the gods rejoice.

I wonder what you dream about,
What person do you see?
For I know this, I dream of you,
I wish you dreamed of me…
©2006-2009 ~PresentDayRomeo
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:icondiamond-tears:
wow you are having a good day for poetry it just keeps getting better and better

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Happily Vacationing in the Land of Not Coping. . . .

Just a fool to believe I have anything she needs
:icontheyoungpoet:
Nice Bro, Keep up the good work, I have my eye on you! xD i am watching you so yeah!, Come check out my gallery i added some new ones.
:iconmordere:
I love that last stanza, especially the last two lines. I've thought that so much, and even written it down, but never put it together into something like this.

One random grammar thing- it's "you're" not "your"...it's a pet peeve.
:iconpresentdayromeo:
thx, i dont know. i have good days and bad days in the poetry sense...

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Love Transends All Bounderies: Life Death Time and Distance

He is not a lover who does who does not love forever. ~Euripides~
:blackrose: :blackrose:

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:iconwanderingflame06:
The second and seventh lines have mistakes. It should be you're not your.
Nice poem though :)

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All that I now possess seems far away
And vanished worlds are real to me today.

Goethe, Faust
:iconpresentdayromeo:
hehe thanks

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Love Transends All Bounderies: Life Death Time and Distance

He is not a lover who does who does not love forever. ~Euripides~
:blackrose: :blackrose:

VIEW MY GALLERY PLEASE!
:iconnoodle-soup:
Beautiful again

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool
:iconpresentdayromeo:
.........ur gonna make me blush............. lol

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Love Transends All Bounderies: Life Death Time and Distance

He is not a lover who does who does not love forever. ~Euripides~
:blackrose: :blackrose:

VIEW MY GALLERY PLEASE!
:iconnoodle-soup:
:D

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Music Is The Beat Of My Heart
~Me ~Because Im Cool

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